Sunday, April 29, 2012

Sissy's Common Errors List



Common Errors List:
1. Misspelling:
Incorrect—“In addition, the barber said, “’So it was going to be very difficult to explain that I had him right in my hands and let him go peacefully—alive and shaved’” (286).
Correct—“In addition, the barber’s said, “‘so it was going to be very difficult to explain that I had him right in my hands and let him go peacefully—alive and shaved’” (286).

2. Instead of a colon, a period was needed:
            Incorrect—“The barber’s moral decision is decided with the following statement: ‘but I don’t want to be a murderer. You came to me for a shave. And I perform my work honorably. I don’t want blood on my hands. Just lather, that’s all. You are an executioner and I am only a barber.’” (287).
            Correct—“ The barber’s moral decision is decided with the following statement. “’But I don’t want to be a murderer. You came to me for a shave. And I perform my work honorably. I don’t want blood on my hands. Just lather, that’s all. You are an executioner and I am only a barber.’” (287).

3. Fragment:
            Incorrect—“Meaning Captain Torres probably always thinks of the repercussions of killing someone before and after he kills people.”
            Correct—“Captain Torres gives thought to killing his enemies.”

4. Missing Period:
            Incorrect—“As Yursil said that “’agent rushed him through signing the contracts, at least the one of which was in English, which Yursil does not read’” (“Slaves put Squid on U.S. Dining Tables from South Pacific Catch”)
            Correct—“As Yursil said that “’agent rushed him through signing the contracts, at least the one of which was in English, which Yursil does not read.'” (“Slaves put Squid on U.S. Dining Tables from South Pacific Catch”)

5. Missing Quotes:
            Incorrect—“This was passed in April 8, 1864 by the senate, and it was adopted by 
December 6, 1865.”
            Correct—“This was passed in April 8, 1864 by the senate, and it was adoptedby 
December 6, 1865.”

6. Missing Period
            Incorrect—“Thailand defines trafficking as ‘recruitment, transportation, transfer, harboring, or receipt of person, by the means of the threat or use of force for the purpose of exploitation’”
            Correct—“Thailand defines trafficking as ‘recruitment, transportation, transfer, harboring, or receipt of person, by the means of the threat or use of force for the purpose of exploitation.’”

1 comment:

  1. Sissy, this list really concerns me. Number 3 is the only item in this list that is technically correct (though it loses key information from the incorrect version), and many of them do not refer to errors you actually had in papers. Please make sure you know why.

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